As I said in my comment, you automatically get 10/10 originality for not going the typical way of fanservice. This will go hand and hand with a sexy impact. Your art style is mesmerizing, however I'm gaze is more on her body. That's because the face and body are on separate levels on the scale of realism. Most likely the animeque eyes are what's distracting me.
As for vision, this doesn't convey a White queen. This conveys a dark beauty / seductress. (Unless you weren't going for an exact vision/symbolism/ect. or any at all.) Since the background is already white, using light blue or silver would be just effective as the pink but will convey a whiteness.
I am a massive fan of Marvel Comics and the X-Men with Emma Frost being one of my favourite Marvel Characters never mind the X-Men.
As a fan of Emma I found this very nice and gives me a reminder of some comics giving heavy detail in the face and not as well detailed but still quite detailed.
The whole overall look of the image is beautiful taking such astonishing character of great depth that wears not the most covering outfit that a lot of fans fantasise about and this piece of work shows why fans have fantasise about her.
Overall and fantastic piece of artwork that could have been created by a professorial comic book illustrator.
While I do know the fact that Emma is a beautiful woman, I don't want her to look like a stripper/sex symbol, but as a force to be reckoned with, a professional, but at the same time still look pretty. After all, a sex symbol is a disrespectful position.
Well for one thing, give him armor but enough to keep him agile too. Matt may have peak human training but he's still just as vulnerable as any other human. Besides, if his sense of touch is superhumanly sensitive, wouldn't the impact of his wounds hurt twice as much? Keep his nose and mouth out too, he'll need them for his senses.